Enimnori: Arrival Alien Invasion, Science Fiction
Newman Springs Publishing, Inc.
Dec 6, 2021
Kindle
159
Amazon
Review by Madison Davis
Member of the Paranormal Romance Guild Review Team
Scott Hathaway is an engineer and Martial Artist and finds himself teleported to another world by magic.
He finds out that Brandon is a magician who accidentally summoned him. Nevertheless Scott and Brandon become friends.
Scott also meets master magician Morgan, Brandon’s teacher, who seems to be far more dangerous than expected.
Both magicians want to save their home, they just can’t agree on a method. Scott wants to help his new friends. Grateful, they want to support him getting back home to his own life…
I don’t want to go deeper into the story to not spoil the read for you.
Enimnori: Arrival, is a book that starts off as an easy read at first, but gets increasingly difficult, and, at times, a bit frustrating. On different occasions the story jumps from one point to the next, without explanation, or even reason, which makes it hard to follow and is confusing.
Also, I wish, the author had taken a bit more time to properly work out and ‘fine tune’ the characters. They are drafted roughly; there’s no development of the characters within the story. They all seem to have one ‘voice’ and are frozen within their frame. Unfortunately, that makes them seem flat and gives the impression the story just stagnates superficially from somewhere in the middle all through the end.
Of the main characters I like Brandon best, at least , at times, he makes me smile.
The story isn’t bad, and I think, the author could have created an excellent book with these ideas. In my opinion, a second edition with a more detailed character image, significant character development, and an easier to read plot flow would be recommendable.