Review: The Twelve Systems Bundle: The Cartel:The Apprentice, Volume 1 & Bright Star:The Apprentice, Volume 2 – EG Manetti

The Twelve Systems Bundle: The Cartel:The Apprentice, Volume 1 & Bright Star:The Apprentice, Volume 2 Book Cover The Twelve Systems Bundle: The Cartel:The Apprentice, Volume 1 & Bright Star:The Apprentice, Volume 2
The Twelve Systems Chronicles
EG Manetti
Science Fiction
Buniac Entertainment, LLC
December 7, 2014

Where duty and passion collide.
A woman in peril. A ruthless warrior. A dangerous contract.

THE CARTEL: The Apprentice, Volume 1

Raised to wealth and privilege, Lilian’s future was shattered when her father was convicted of terrible crimes. By law and custom she should have followed him into death to redeem her corrupt genetics. Desperate to avoid execution for crimes not her own, Lilian accepts an indenture contract with a powerful warrior. For three years he will have total control of her body, will and intellect.

Lucius Mercio commands one of the most powerful Cartels in the Twelve Systems. As clever and ambitious as he his ruthless, Lucius' wealth, influence, and power are place him among the elite of the warrior caste. It is not enough. Lucius intends to take his Cartel to unimaginable heights with the aid of Lilian's brilliance. He faces only one obstacle. Lucius must keep Lilian alive.

BRIGHT STAR: The Apprentice, Volume 2

In the second volume in the Twelve Systems Chronicles Lilian’s enemies are more determined than ever to see her destroyed. A ghost from her past will imperil her future and threaten to destroy Lucius’ slowly developing trust. To survive the next set of challenges Lilian will need to find new reserves of courage, wit and determination.

When Lucius’ motivations and ambitions are revealed, they are far more extraordinary than Lilian imagined. His rivals are about to increase in number and ferocity as they seek to limit his expanding wealth and power. They will use any means to undermine and destroy his plans including his notorious apprentice. To advance his ambitions, Lucius must be more ruthless and devious than ever before. To succeed, Lucius requires Lilian’s brilliance. To make use of it, he must keep her alive. It is going to prove more difficult than he anticipated.

Reviewed by Melissa Brus

Member of the Paranormal Romance Review Team

This is the beginning of a seven book series that covers three years in the life of Lillian, a disgraced warrior. In her world, protocol is absolute. The strictures that guide life in the Twelve Systems are unyielding. Lillian is caught in the aftermath of her father’s choices. Stripped of her honor, she is facing three years of a true trial. Failure equals her death. And there are many who wish that fate on her. Her master, Lucius Mercio is her only lifeline in this perilous journey. His reasons for buying her apprenticeship are his own and slowly are revealed in this story.

The world building in this series is absolutely phenomenal. Manetti has created a society that is both technologically advanced and firmly entrenched in an iron-clad caste system. There is a distinct separation between physical desire and emotional commitment. Marriage and subsequent children are more often politically influenced rather than love driven decisions. In this society, indentured servitude/apprenticeship is a path for non warrior class members to earn their way up. In these apprenticeships, there is no individual will, only the will of the master. The apprentice has to be available to meet whatever need the master requires, including sexually.

This bundle covers the first year of Lillian’s service to Lucius Mercio. Through her eyes we learn about the society and how her role will be different. It is hard to “watch” at times. The pace is slow in the first few chapters and feels like it drags. A lot of that is probably due to the formality of the language, as well as having to learn the customs of this world. But as Lillian begins to interact with others in her new role as an apprentice, the reader is pulled into a story that is truly riveting. Lillian is brilliant. She is fierce and smart and vulnerable and endearing. She has an inner resolve that is enviable. Her confusion about her feelings for her Monsignor is so relatable and real. I am well and truly invested in her. This is described as a romance. Because of her societal position, there are some that might not agree that Lillian is truly in a romance. Based on the world that Manetti has built, it is also in doubt. But there is no doubt that there is a warmth of feeling between these two that goes beyond their caste designators. I, for one, am very willing to keep reading to find out what perils will face Lillian in her next two years of servitude.


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